When your heart feels so hefty
And deep inside, you know it’s empty
Just don’t give up, the time you have is plenty!
When you feel like it’s a drought
And if it’s been a hell throughout
Just don’t give up, failures are merely a strike out!
When you forget how to smile
And if it’s really been a while
Just don’t give up, it’s simply an other mile!
When you think your efforts are vain
And if you’re going through so much pain
Just don’t give up, there’s sunshine after the rain!
When you find yourself in trouble
And if it keeps growing double
Just don’t give up, life still has it’s bubble!
Because life is quite a mystery
And you know success doesn’t come free
Just don’t give up, but create your own history!
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My sweet sweet Preeths.
It’s like we’re living the same life…..are we?
Beause these are the exact emotions I’m feeling at this moment.
It’s like you telepathically hear me and pen these especially for me
You SPEAK TO MY SOUL
Love ya lil one
Huggggggs
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Dearest Ru, thank you for reading few of my posts. It really means a lot to me.. ❣️❣️ I am glad I could write your heart out!! 😄😄 Love you my big sister. Huggs 🤗🤗
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Very motivating and I love that it rhymes
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How inspiring 🔆
Thank you for sharing!
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Thank you dear. Thank you for your time on my blogs. Much appreciated. 🤝❣️
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You are warmly welcome! ❤
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Such a beautiful poem on keep going on. I don’t know how I missed it. Beautifully written. Thank you so much for sharing this.😊
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Thank you dear Joyce. ❤️❤️
It’s okie, sometimes I miss many of our fellow bloggers posts too. It happens 😣
Am glad you liked it, means so much to me. 🤗🤗
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It was my pleasure 😊
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Success indeed doesn’t come free. Great lines ❤️
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Thank you dear Akan. That’s true 🤝
Am glad you liked it ❤️
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A wonderfully crafted rhyming poem! The message of hope and very empowering! We have different definitions of success, and for me, to do what we are passionate about, is already a great success. Keep on keeping on!
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Thank you dear. You always say the best things. I love how you define success!❤️
Wisely said 🤝 Thank you so much for spending your time on my posts, it really means a lot!
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You’re most welcome! Thank you for your appreciation. And your posts are worth reading for.🥰
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Very nice
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Thank you so much. Am pleased to know that. Thank you for stopping by. ❣️
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Thanks
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I needed this poem, it spoke to me. Thanks!
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Thank you so much. That’s so good to hear. I am glad the purpose of this poem is achieved.❣️❣️ Thank you for stopping by
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Lyrically touched my soul. Thank you
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Thank you. Am glad to hear that. Thanks for stopping by, it really means a lot to me. ❤️❤️
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Bless chief
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What a beautiful poem….uplifting words….it’s like after reading your poem, I feel calm…keep expressing from your heart, dear Preeths ❤️ ✨ 🤗 💫
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Thank you Navin. You are motivating me every time and it really means so much to me. ❤️❤️ Thanks for being there.
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You’re very welcome, Preeths….keep blossoming & evolving ❤️✨
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That’s so impressive.. positive vibes and an amazing message..ur creations are always top notch
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Awww..thank you dear. That’s so kind of you to say! ❤️❤️ Am glad you find it impressive. 🤝
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What a great poem! True, we don’t know if success come free (more likely not), so it is important to do “just don’t give up”! Thank you for this amazing poem!
HiRO
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Thank you so much. ❤️❤️ Your kind words is much appreciated. 😍😍 Thank you for your time, it means so much to me 🤗
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You’re welcome 🙂
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A possitive message ,we should not give up whatever happens. Very good 🙂☺️🌹
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Thank you very much ❤️❤️
Am glad you you liked it. Thanks for stopping by 💐
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❤️❣️🌹🍫🌺👌God bless you.
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Wonderful words to live by ✊🏼❤
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Thanks for the uplifting poem Preeths and such great reminders for us to continue reaching and not give up!! A great poem my friend.💖💖
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Thank you dear Cindy. ❣️❣️❣️ Am glad you liked it. Your words truly motivates me. 🤗🤗
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You’re most welcome Preeths! 💖💖💖always my pleasure my friend❣️
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“When you forget how to smile
And if it’s really been a while
Just don’t give up, it’s simply an other mile!”
Oh, you are so great. Lovely poem!
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Thank you dear Gabriela. That’s so kind of you to say! ❤️❤️ It really means a lot to me 🤗
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My pleasure 🥰❤️🌹
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Lovely writeup
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Thank you dear. Am glad you liked it. Thank you for stopping by ❣️❣️
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Indeed the poem was inspiring and helpful in lighting up the whole mood of any person 😅😅
“”When you forget how to smile
And if it’s really been a while
Just don’t give up, it’s simply an other mile!””
These lines were too good 👍👍
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Thank you dear Aparna. ❣️❣️ It feels too good to see you repeating few lines. Glad you find it inspiring dear,that means so much to me 🤗🤗🤗
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It was all my pleasure dear 🤗
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You keep coming up with positive and motivating poems. Wonderful 🙂
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Thank you dear Vignesh. This is so encouraging to me. Thank you again ❤️
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My pleasure 🙂
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What a beautiful poem with so much positivity, Preeths! I like this fighting spirit. Well done 👍💐
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Thank you Mr KK 🤝
Appreciation from a poet like you means a world to me! ❣️❣️
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You’re welcome. You are also a great poet.💖
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Extraordinary post, akka! Very motivational and much needed at the moment. Beautifully expressed! 🤍
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Thank you dearie. You always say beautiful things ❣️❣️ Am glad to hear that it’s much needed for you. Much love ❤️❤️🤗🤗😍
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Such a motivating and inspirational poem. I absolutely loved it, Preeths
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Thank you dearie. ❤️❤️ I am glad this inspired you. Such a lovely comment to read. 🤗💐
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You’re most welcome ☺️
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A lovely poem, dearest Preeths. Such an important reminder to let life come, just as it is, pause, breathe into it, reflect, and then, as you write, create from there. Your poem reminds me of a portion of my diary entry for tomorrow. How lovely that is. Happy Sunday, my dear friend. ❤️❤️❤️
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Awww…that’s so cool dear Jeff. I am waiting for it already! ❤️❤️ Thank you for the continuous support, it means more than I can say. Sending you flowers 💐💐
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Aww, how lovely, it is posted! How fun it all is. You’re most welcome, dearest Preeths. Always, always! It is my complete pleasure, my dear friend. ❤️❤️❤️
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Great conclusion to inspiring words. 🖤🖤
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Thank you dear Carter. 🖤🖤 Your support is always motivating. 🤗🤗
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Lovely poem and very important message – don’t give up, one step at a time keep going no matter what!
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Thank you dear Pragalbha. ❣️ Am glad you you liked it. Have a wonderful Sunday ❤️💐
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💛💝🌹
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Wow my dear Preeths, what an empowering piece!!!! I feel so at peace after reading…you are one beautiful inspirer! The rhyming and soothing flow here is truly a blessing to read! Fantastically weaved, my lovely friend!!! Thank you for another gift 🙏🏻🖤🤗
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Dear Ace, thank you so much. ❣️❣️
I am glad to know that. Calling me an inspirational feels too good. Am humbled ❤️. You are always the best to always say the nicest things. Thank you dearie. Sending you much love 🤗🤗💐
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Love the message!!!!
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Thank you dear Happy Panda. ❤️❤️
I am pleased to know that and it means so much to me.🤗
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This came at a wonderful time. Beautiful write as always ❤️
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Thank you dear D. That’s so kind of you to say! ❣️❣️ Have a wonderful Sunday 🤗
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You always post on the correct time…each time when i feel like giving up for what i am fighting or just feel thats its enough…ur poems are so so so encouraging…n i get back to work feeling that tomorrow all this will be worth it!
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Awwww……dear, this is the best comment for me today. ❣️❣️ It’s a joy to read that it helped you back up and you feel so encouraging. That’s the whole purpose of this poem. ❤️❤️ Just remember, when the going gets tough…the tough gets going! Hang in there dear, life still has it’s bubble. 🤗🤗
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So encourgaing and so beautiful! In love with this Preeths
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Thank you dear Akshita. ❣️❣️ I am pleased to know that, it really means so much to me. Much love 🤗🤗
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Woww!! My sweet akka, Are you came from heaven? You’re the gift that god send to me!! Wow wow wow!! I’m flattered by your inspiring poem..! I’m in love with your poems Akka..! Each and everyday your poems are becoming my favourite..! You will never fail to inspire me..! This is a masterpiece piece..! Each and every words are uplifting Akka..! Very powerful..! You made me very strong..! Woww..! I have one award for my Inspiring sista..! The “RHYMING QUEEN AWARD” goes to my lovely sister..!😍🤗
Akka, you’re an incredible soul..!
“When you think your efforts are vain
And if you’re going through so much pain
Just don’t give up, there’s sunshine after the rain!
When you find yourself in trouble
And if it keeps growing double
Just don’t give up, life still has it’s bubble!”
Akka, i think I should write your poem here because, I can’t pick my favourite stanza..! Each and every stanzas are so very powerful..! I will save this with me Akka..! You’re an angel..! Awwww!! I don’t even know how to express about your marvellous work..! Such a excellent write Akka..! I’m speechless..! You’re such a sweet and lovely soul..! I’m so lucky to have a inspiring sister like you..! Woww!! I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT VERY MUCH AKKA..! Sending you lots of love and hugs..!🤗🤗🤗 Have a peaceful and blessed weekend Akka..!💕💕✨💖
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Oh my dear sister, what an incredible comment this is. ❣️❣️ Thank you from the bottom of my heart for all the love and support you always have for me. It means a million things to me. 🤗🤗.
It makes me glad to know that you liked this poem as a whole. I am also glad to read that it inspired you. You are a sweetheart. ❣️❣️ Stay blessed dear. ❤️❤️ Sending you much love 💐
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Wowww!! What a lovely comment!! Akka, you’re truly amazing..! Wowww!! Your words means a lot to me Akka..! You’re very welcome my dear sister..! It’s absolutely my pleasure..! 😊🤗🤗💕💖💖💖
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Just the words I needed to hear. Your words are beautifully written and every word holds powerful meanings. ❤
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Awww… thank you dear Daphny. ❤️❤️ You always have good things to say. Trust me, it means a lot. 🤗🤗 I am glad this poem inspired you. Sending you much love. ❤️❤️
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You have an amazing way with words. Its simple yet powerful and I say this straight from the heart 🙂 I am glad that I read this poem too its been a tuff month but I’m not giving up ❤️❤️
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Dear Daphny, first I thank you for always appreciating my works. ❣️❣️ I am glad that this poem motivated you. Just remember, when the going gets tough, the tough gets going! Hang in there dear, just don’t give up! Sending you strength and prayers. ❤️🤗
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Thank you ☺️❤️
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Loved this… a great message and one worth sharing. The last line “Just don’t give up, but create your own history!” summed it up. We are creating our own history. very encouraging😇❤
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Thank you dear Mr.Poet. ❣️❣️ It feels so good to read your comments. Glad to see you around. You always have good things to say. 🤗🤗
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surely you are welcome and a gift
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This mantra is my too!!
Thank you.
Joanna
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Thank you dear Joanna. Am pleased to know that. Thank you for stopping by. ❤️❤️ Have a lovely weekend 🤝
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What a wonderful post on never giving up! Loved the positive vibe throughout! ❤️❤️✨🙏🤗
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Thank you dear Diana. ❤️❤️ That’s so kind of you to say and am glad you liked it. Stay blessed dear 🤗🤗
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A poem that reinforces to stay positive and never give up attitude. Much needed when one loses that sight. Wonderful write Preeths ❣️
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Thank you dear Radhika. It’s always a bliss to read your comments. ❣️❣️ Am glad you liked it, stay well dear 🤗🤗
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Impressive!
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Thank you dear Nithish. That’s so kind of you to say. 🤝 Thank you for stopping by and for connecting with Offshore Writings. ❤️❤️
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My pleasure. You are doing a great job indeed!
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Thank you. I am humbled to hear that. 😍😍
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Awww, this is excellent poem filled with powerful positivity. Brilliantly beautiful dear ❤ especially loved this stanza though entire poem is awesome. Be blessed n happy sweet one 😇❤🤗
When you find yourself in trouble
And if it keeps growing double
Just don’t give up, life still has it’s bubble!
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Awww…. thank you dearie. ❣️❣️
You always have nice things to say. I love your every word. Thank you for supporting my works and for always being there. That really means so much to me. ❣️❣️ Am glad to read those lines , it’s my favourite too. 🤓 Much love dear Suma ❤️❤️😍
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Truely pleasure is always mine to read n support your great work my dearest sweet ❤ 🤗
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A good message for sure. We learn more about success from our losses than from our wins. Stay well. Allan
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Indeed you are right Allan. 🤝 Thank you for reading. Have a wonderful weekend ❤️❤️
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