When I am really broken on the inside
I reach for my pen to heal my scars
My only beloved and my best friend!
How much I turn to you my pen?
Cause you’re the only one
Who knows me deeply from within!
And when I was only ten
You were patient with my childish dreams
Like dreaming of becoming a beautiful queen!
And when I turned eighteen
I am holding on you and I’m still so keen
For you’re the truest friend I’ve ever seen!
When all the other people just don’t care
You were beside and you were there
My most special thoughts with you I share!
I turn to you when I’m so weak
For you’re the one who understands me
When I really feel like I can’t speak!
I turn to you when no one is on my side
You know my every secret
For with you there is nothing to hide!
Cause I know my secrets you won’t reveal
You change my feelings into words
For you know what exactly I feel!
I dreamed to be a poet some day
And on this moment I want to thank you
For you let others, call me a poet today!
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Anguish is written all over this poem but so is inspiration and a healthy vibe!
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A poet indeed, dear Preeths. A very good one! I love your work, just like this piece. It speaks to me of that internal process of discovery, contemplation, and reflection. Wonderfully beautiful, my dear friend. ❤️❤️
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Thank you dear Jeff. You always say the nicest things. ❤️❤️ Am glad this speaks to you…. This is the greatest compliment one can give! Thank you dear Jeff and you made my day!! 💃💃
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That is so lovely to know, and you are most welcome, dear Preeths. It is all true, my friend. Lovely. Have a wonderful week! ❤️❤️
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This also is a very nice poem.. 😄
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This is beautiful! Loved it😊
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Thank you dear. Am glad you liked it ❤️
Thanks again for connecting with Offshore Writings. 🤗🤗
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Beautifully written ✏️
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Thank you dear. 😍😍 That’s so kind of you to say ❤️
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Wow, very poetic poetry. Nice
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Thank you Kevin. 🤝 Am glad you liked it. Thanks for connecting with Offshore Writings ❤️
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Welcome🙂 I’m glad I did
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Loved it
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Thank you dear. Glad you liked it ❤️
Many thanks for stopping by 🤝
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Lovely sentiments expressed. 🖤
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Thank you dear Carter 🖤
That’s so kind of you to say!!
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Nicely written ❤️
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Thank you dear. Am glad you liked it ❤️
Thank you again for stopping by
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🌹😄
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Thoughts from the heart, like this poem, are the best. Well done. 🌟✨💫
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Thank you so much. Am glad you liked it ❤️🤗. Thank you for stopping by 🤝
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This poem really spoke to me, especially the part about your pen turning feelings into words. I’ve never been very good at saying how I feel. When I spoke with my first psychologist when I suffered from depression, I used to write a poem for each of our sessions instead of explaining how I felt through words because expressing emotions through poetry was much easier for me.
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Thank you dear. Glad that this poem resonates with you. ❤️❤️❤️ It indeed is true that words have so much power and when it is penned, I am sure that it conveys our thoughts straight from heart!!! I am sorry to hear that you have gone through depression… and am sure you have overcome it!! ❤️❤️ Thank you for sharing this with me.
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Oh this is so relatable. Writing makes life a whole lot easier to deal with.
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Thank you Shweta.True, writing makes our life easier to deal with!!!
Glad to see you around after long time. Hope all is well. Take care and stay safe ❤️❤️
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It’s my pleasure ☺️
I had been on a break which ended up being too long. I returned to the blogosphere yesterday. Hopefully the streak will continue. I’m doing good.
I hope that you and yours are safe and well too. Take care. Stay safe!
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again n again i m reading it….i have read this long back too….but today avain felt like reading it…💖❤
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Thank you Ayushi. That’s so kind of you to read it again. ❤️❤️ Means so much to me 🤗
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Oh I so love this Preeths .. very well written 🤗🤗
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Thank you dear. Was thinking about you lately 😉. Couldn’t see you for a while. How are you doing? Kids and family, are they doing good? Stay safe, cases are going crazy high everyday. 😥😥
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Can relate with it, so so beautifully written and deep 💙 💙
I missed your blogs
Hope you are doing good, take care ☺🤗
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Wow, what a surprise!!!! 😃😃 How are you dear Era? Seeing your name pop up is always a bliss to me ❤️❤️. I really really missed you 💔💔 Thank you for finding time to visit us. 🤗🤗 Hope you are good and safe, please take care of yourself. Love you loads 🥰🥰😘😘
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Hehe 😀😀, I m happy too.
I m good, how you have been?
You too take care and stay safe 💕💙🤗
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You are the poet of today n forever
Wherein all your poems are amazing the reader
Your pen wipes out your falling tear
When a poet is thirsty to write no fear
And writing skills makes you rare
You being a great n poetic writer
Know the acknowledge and adhere
The readers always appreciate and admire
You are the poet of today n forever
And on the site of offshore writer
Keep speaking thru your pen like none ✍
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Wow .. wow…. I am just flattered dear Suma. 🤗🤗❤️❤️ I am searching for words to thank you, you have no idea how much this means to me. 🥰🥰 Amazing, beautiful compliment ever I have received!!! I am truly humbled and this, I saved in my gallery already.😉😉
You are a beautiful soul to say something beautiful every time!! Thank you tons and love you dear ❤️❤️🤗🤗🥰🥰
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I never tried to flatter you but 😅
Very glad to see you happy n what you saved in your gallary is of your own deserving talent. Keep it safe n cherish with cheers. Happy weekend my dear friend 🙂💖
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I liked the words of your blog. Hope we follow each other.
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Thank you so much for your kind comment. ❤️❤️ Thanks for stopping by 🤝. Gave a follow already
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You are the most welcome, and it is a great honor to me that you followed my humble blogs, i have already followed you too
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Sooo wisely delivered in poetry Preeths!
Indeed…. the power of the pen can’t be underestimated .
sooo wel written! xooxoxoxo ❣️❣️❤️💗
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Awww., Thank you dearest Cindy. ❤️
I so agree that the power of the pen can’t be underestimated. 👏👏 Am glad you liked it. Xoxoxo
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Oh this was absolutely beautiful dear!! Very elegantly written!! Stay blessed dear. You are an adorable poet❤️❤️🙏💐🤗
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Awww… Thank you dear Diana. I am humbled by your lovely comment. ❤️❤️😍😍 Sending you love and hugs 🤗😍
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Oh, you are a real poet. A wonderful one. And you are a great soul too.
xoxoxo
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Awww…. Thank you dear Gabriela. ❤️
I am humbled by your beautiful comment.
The best comment from my best poet,!!! 🤗🤗 . Much love 🥰🥰
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You are a wonderful poet. There I said it again 🤗🌸🥰🌹❤️
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Woohoo…….You made my day!!!! 😘
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Lovely tribute to your dear pen! I agree words can help in healing ourselves. ❤
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Thank you dear Anisha. ❤️❤️
How true, that words have the power to heal ourselves. 🙌🙌
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It was my pleasure 💕
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Such a pleasure reading the poem ! We couldn’t have imagined calming down our inner turmoils using such a potent companion, the pen which has so much potential in it!Thanks for sharing such a beautiful creation❤️
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Awwww… Thank you so much. ❤️❤️
What an incredible say.. indeed it is true that pen has so much potential to bring out our raw emotions. Am pleased to know that you liked it 🤗🤗🥰🥰
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This is lovely beautiful expression of gratitude for the joy of the pen that is truly our best friend, that brings us closer to who we really are, comforts us with finding words for our feelings and supports us in our growth.
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That’s indeed right Pragalbha. 🙌
The pen becomes our best friend at times of troubles and it knows to comfort us from within! I believe this is the journey of every writer. 😉 Thank you Pragalbha for the precious, truthful comment. ❤️❤️
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My pleasure 💛✨
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And what a wonderful and amazing poet you are ❤❤❤❤
You explained the mindset of all the writers so well 👏👏👏
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Thank you dear Vani ❤️❤️.
That’s so kind of you to say. 🤗🤗 Am glad to hear that every writer could relate with it!😍😍
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Reblogged this on Love and Love Alone.
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Thank you 😍😍
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You’re not just “a poet”, you’re an AMAZING poet!!!! And this piece is just, wow, has to be one of my favorites of yours!!!! The flow is so perfect, beautiful and dreamy! I seriously resonate and connect with your words, you describe a writer’s journey so vividly!!!! INCREDIBLE, dear Preeths! I can’t tell you how much I love this piece 🖤🖤🤗💖
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Awwww… Thank you Dearie. ❤️❤️ I am pleased to know that it becomes one of your favourite! 😍😍 I can’t thank you enough for you beautiful feedback. 🤗 You are a honeybun 😘😘. Oh dear Ace, you are so loved!!! I am so humbled by your every word and it means so much to me ❤️❤️
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This is soo very lovely!!! And this is the feeling of every writer. 😍😍🥰
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Thank you dear Anushka. 😍😍 Am glad you could relate. Indeed every one of us can relate too. 🤗🤗
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No problem 😌
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Lovely dear Preeths🤗🤗⚘⚘
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Thank you dear Anan. It’s always my pleasure to see your comment. ❤️❤️ Love you loads 😍😍😘😘
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I really admire your straight blog! As in I have a very clear mind as too what you want to do! And that’s makes me like you a lot
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Awwww…. How sweet!!! ❤️❤️ Thank you dear Riya for always being there and supporting my works. I am glad you liked it. Much love 🤗🤗😍😍
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Deep thoughts beautifully expressed, Preethes! ❤ Indeed you are a poet! All the best!
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Awwww…. thank you so much dear Cheryl. ❤️❤️ I appreciate your kind words and for calling me a poet… 🤭🤭. It just rhymed, so I wrote that line. But I am really thankful that you call me a poet! ❤️❤️🤗🤗🤗
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Woww!! This is a fabulous poem akka.. And very well said.. Even we will not say everything to others or parents or friends etc.. but we will take a pen and will write or feelings or happiness etc.. Only our pen know about us everything.. I love this poem very much akka..
“Cause I know my secrets you won’t reveal
You change my feelings into words
For you know what exactly I feel!
Loved it very much akka.. That’s really true.. We will write our feeling into words..😊😊
“When all the other people just don’t care
You were beside and you were there
My most special thoughts with you I share!”
This I love very much akka.. It’s really awesome.❣❣.
“When all the other people just don’t care
You were beside and you were there
My most special thoughts with you I share!”
This stanza too I loved it sooo much akka..
Totally I loved this poem very much akka..💖💖💖
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Awwww… Thank you dear for sending me the longest comment ever! ❤️❤️❤️
I am so glad you liked the poem itself. It’s nice to hear that you could relate few lines with you 😍😍 It means so much to me and it’s very sweet of you to quote your favourite lines here. Much love to you my dear Sissy 🤗🤗😍😍😘😘
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Most welcome akka..❤❤❤ Its all my pleasure.. Much love to you my sweet big sistaaa..🤗🤗🤗
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Beautiful piece ❤️❤️
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Thank you dear Ash. ❤️❤️ That’s do kind of you to say. 🤗🤗
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My pleasure reading 💗
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“I turn to you when I’m so weak
For you’re the one who understands me
When I really feel like I can’t speak!”
So so marvelous and truthful. 🥺♥️♥️
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Thank you dear… ❤️❤️ I believe that we all have been through this and am glad you could relate it 😍😍 That’s so nice of you to quote your favourite lines here 🤗🤗
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The opening line..ohh woww
“When I am really broken on the inside
I reach for my pen to heal my scars
My only beloved and my best friend!”
I got hooked from the word go
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Awwww… Thank you dear. ❤️❤️ Am so glad you liked it. It means so much to me 🤗🤗
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You are welcome
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Loved it!
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Awww .. thank you dear Akshita. That’s so nice to hear ❤️❤️🤗🤗
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