I will finally!

Some days it just goes like I’m barely scraping by
I get discouraged,wondering why I should even try
Tired of crying myself to sleep
And some nights, I can’t help but weep
But hopefully there comes a day
After all the odds and I can bravely say
That I’ve beaten all the troubles
To reap life’s sweetest rewards
And gone through enough pain
Peace and happiness, I will finally gain!

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My Passion for writing unfolded during this lockdown, and here I am a blogger toady!

69 thoughts on “I will finally!

  1. Fantastically created and delivered, dear Preeths. The “ups and downs” of life are so much a part of the human experience, aren’t they. You describe it very well in this lovely poem. Rawness and hopefulness. ❀❀

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    1. True that!!! 🀝 Couldn’t agree more
      Staying positive in our hard times is the greatest achievement. Thank you dear for spending your time here. It means so much to me ❀️ πŸ€—

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    1. 😭😭😭 I even missed seeing you around. Thank God you found me. 😘😘
      You are a sweetheart dear Carla. And I treasure our friendship as you are one of my favourite writer. Love and hugs β€οΈπŸ€—πŸ€—


      1. Oh my dearest Ka, I don’t deserve such compliment, I am really a humble person.. But thank you so much ❀️the most important thing is that we are back in connection ❀️😊😁Love and hugs for you too πŸ€—πŸ€—β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ

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    1. Awww… Thank you for your kind comment. You always say nice things that gives me joy. 😍😍😍 I am also pleased to know that you loved this poem. Stay safe .. much love πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ€—

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  2. This is amazing, heartfelt, oozing with beauty and so so inspiring!!!!! I absolutely love it, my wonderful friend!!!!! I hope you know what an amazing writer you truly are and what a kind/beautiful soul you always are!!! You’re like the queen of magical endings and this one is just even more spectacular!!!! Keep shining, dear Preeths! You’re a shining star πŸ’«πŸ’«πŸ–€

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    1. Wow!!!! I am so flattered by your sweet comment πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—. It’s the best comment I read today dear Ace. You should know, how supportive you are to me from the day we are connected!! ❣️❣️ Your words of encouragement is the one which adds power to my poetry! πŸ₯°πŸ₯° You are a honeybun πŸ€—πŸ€— I treasure you, your friendship and all your honey comments that you leave for me. Love you loads ❣️❣️❣️

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      1. Awwww I treasure you too!!!! You mean a lot to me and it’s always a pleasure to read your amazing work!!! I truly mean every word!! Love you πŸ–€πŸ€—

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  3. Another beautiful & heartfelt poem….your words are full of different emotions….but there’s strength, peace & hope as well….”Peace and happiness, I will finally gain!” ❀️

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  4. the sadness due to failures is also important i guess…bcoz that will help you to cherish success…n gradually looking for success u will.encouter more of failures too….n finally they become a part of life for you…which then you will see as a strenght supplement!

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  5. Despair and discouragement beautifully and appropriately expressed! Life will always have its challenges, but inner peace and contentment help us overcome the challenges. These are very difficult days filled with dangers and sadness. But better days lie ahead! We hope it will be soon! πŸ™‚ Stay safe, Preethes. ❀

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    1. Awwww… Thank you for this insightful comment dear Cheryl. It’s indeed true that better days are ahead of us!!! We just need to hold on to our strength. Thank you Cheryl and you too stay safe β£οΈβ£οΈπŸ€—πŸ€—

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