Queen of the crown!

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She is the Queen!
Who is She?

The one who lifts when I am down
When people fool me like I am a clown
She picks me up if I am to drown!

Her love has never fallen short
The one that stays close to my heart
When the world become my helpless court!

Every time I lost my hope
She’d be there with me to cope
And reminds me that life is just a slope!

In every failures when I cried
All the corners I would hide
But she’d be there by my side!

She cooks yummy
It always filled my tummy
And I call her Mommy!

She deserves to be called a queen
My life without her would be mean
She is the Queen of the Crown!

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109 thoughts on “Queen of the crown!”

  1. Wow, how heartfelt and beautiful this is, Akka! Queen mother 🤩 Just tooo lovely. Nice rhyme scheme too. This piece is oozing love!
    (Don’t mind me, I’m binge reading some of your older posts rn😉).

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    1. Thank you dear sister. How sweet of you to read my older posts and give some good comments. ❤️❤️ You are always the best. Am glad you liked the poem. Indeed we are blessed with Queen Mother ❣️❣️

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  3. This was a beautiful poem, it’s always great to pay respects to our elders like our mother and show them that we appreciate everything that they do for us. Nice use of rhyme and imagery. You are a great poet ❤

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    1. Aww… thank you so much dear. I am flattered by your kind comment..❤️❤️ Your visit to my blog is highly appreciated and that means so much to me!!!! 🤗🤗
      Thanks for connecting with Offshore Writings

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  8. Wow, such a beautiful Poem! Each of your words are precious than the diamonds Crown. It just made me drown 🤗❤

    This is 😇🙏
    She cooks yummy
    It always filled my tummy
    And I call her Mommy!

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    1. I am in awww of your comment. Thank you dear for your kind words, it really bring smile to my face. 😍😍😍

      Aren’t those lines so true with every mom??? Mom’s are special 🥰🥰🥰❣️❣️

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  12. Awww this is so so beautiful and heartfelt! What a sweet and touching post to mothers everywhere!!! Amazing write, as always!!! Probably my favorite Mother’s Day tribute I’ve seen today!!! I always get excited to see your name pop up in my reader, you never fail to deliver spectacular pieces!!!!! Love you, my dear friend 🖤🤍🤗

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    1. Awwww…. You made my day!! I am lost for words to give you the thank you note dear Ace 🤗🤗🤗🤗. It’s this support and motivation that keeps me going everytime. ❣️❣️❣️ I would love to hug and thank you if you are near … 🤗🤗❣️❣️ Your every word is special to me and I promise to treasure it in my heart . Love you dearest Ace ❤️😍

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      1. Awww you are so kind!!!! It’s always a pleasure and I mean every word! I would LOVE that, it’d be a true honor and joy to meet you!!!! The Universe will make it happen! Love you, my dear sister! So grateful for you 🖤🤗🤍

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        1. I did dear, lemme tell you…. Please consider activating your comment section.. I was tend to write something soon after I read that, but lo…I couldn’t.
          It’s such beautiful poem by a young girl like you. ❤️❤️❤️

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          1. Thanks you so much!
            I am so dear! I won’t do that!
            See I will tell you why they are off, once when I had like 9-10 followers my comments were on. And then some guy commented something very inappropriate! And specially I am so young and that comment was wild! It was really inappropriate! It was not hate comment. But something I can’t even tell. And i know you got the context!

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            1. Oops…. People like these are monsters 😠😠 I am sorry dear, you had to go through this! But there is an option that you can send those comments to spam and it won’t bother you even if those evil people comes back. But it’s purely your choice dear. ❤️❤️
              Last but not least…. I love this… I am so dear, I won’t do that!!!! I am with you little sister in whatever you do. 🤗🤗 Love and hugs 🤗🥰😍🥰

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              1. I know right! I hate them! There one comment can ruin someone’s trust! See what I have figured and my parents, that I am too young to be handling those types of comments! I know about spam and all! I am sorry I can’t switch em on again! Sorry
                Aww i know my didi is always with me ♥️😘

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  19. Awwwww!!! What a lovely beautiful poem akka!😍😍😍 Really fabulous!💖💖💖 Happy mother’s day my strong akka.❤❤❤ Have a blessed and fantastic day my akka. ❣❣🤗🤗.. Sending you huge hug and loads of love.🤗🤗❤❤

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