I am a mess…

I’ve been lost but I’m not a loser

I’ve failed but I’m not a failure

I’m a wreck but I’m not totaled

I’m fractured but I’m not broken

I’ve fallen but I will rise up

I’ve been destroyed but I will rebuild

I am a mess but I can always mend!

Offshore Writings

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Published by Offshorewriter

My Passion for writing unfolded during this lockdown, and here I am a blogger toady!

77 thoughts on “I am a mess…

  1. A beautiful poem, exposing the true nature of the paradoxes in life. This is a gorgeous reminder for us all. Thank you, dearest Preeths for sharing it with us. ❤️🥰❤️


  2. Oh dear….Sweetie your poem is making me cry…for real.
    It’s so beautiful.
    I feel like I’m standing in front of the mirror and….

    Lovely. Very well written dear. xoxoxoxo

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  3. yess..this definately is true…u r making people realise that what if things didnt worked out once , twice or thrice….thats not the end of tge world…n we can always make up for it!

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      1. My fever is much better … still recovering and a relative living close by tested positive .. the full family .. two elders admitted for o2 support .. so a lil anxious .. but ok too 😊💕💕thanks for checking dearie.. means a lot

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  4. This is so beautiful, uplifting and inspiring!!! I absolutely love it!!! It’s simple but so powerful and your words hold such strength, love and courage!!!! Amazingly done my friend! I always love your work 🖤🤗💫

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    1. Hi dear, it’s just here…. I am sorry, I missed out to reply! You always say the nicest things. Thank you dear Ace for your constant support and that really is encouraging me everytime. 😍😍 I am lucky to be your friend here, your motivation is highly appreciated. Loads of love 🤗🤗❤️❤️

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      1. Oh no worries!!! It told me there was an error sending my comment so I wasn’t sure! But glad it went through!! You’re most welcome, it’s always a pleasure and I mean every word!! Love you, dear friend 🖤🤗

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  5. Brilliant poem! Excellent perspective. ❤ We must define ourselves, not by our misfortunes and our missteps, but by our belief in ourselves and our power to overcome. Thank you, Preethes, for this inspiring message! Have a great day! ❤

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    1. Thank you dear Cheryl. Thank you for your kind comment 😍😍 Indeed we must believe in ourselves and our power to overcome. Glad you liked this. Thank you and have a happy day ahead 🤝


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