Won’t you please?

Many have gone before you
Those who live are very few!

Living is really a tough game
It’s not that you ought to be fame!

But aim high to reach stars
Though your life has it’s own scars!

Everyone’s life is not very perfect
So don’t just give up when some failures affect!

Life has just one episode
Live with cheer and be gratitude!

Life’s too short and time won’t freeze
Enjoy it all, won’t you please?

Offshore Writings

Kindly read our other poems here.Thank you!

Published by Offshorewriter

My Passion for writing unfolded during this lockdown, and here I am a blogger toady!

57 thoughts on “Won’t you please?

  1. Ah, yes. Enjoying life just as it is, so important. Hardships come, as do easier times. A beautiful poem, full of wisdom and love. Wonderful, dearest Preeths. ❤️❤️❤️

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    1. Thank you dearest Jeff. ❣️❣️ How could I thank you for all your beautiful comment? You make my day ❤️❤️🥰
      Am glad you liked this poem, it feels so good to hear. 🤗🤗

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      1. You’re most welcome, dearest Preeths. Awww, I’m so pleased to know this. How lovely. Ah, you thank me enough through your being just as you are. 🥰 I loved your poem. ❤️❤️❤️ Have a lovely day. 💞

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    1. Thank you Cindy. You are special and you always remember my previous poem. ❤️❤️🤗🤗🤗 Yes, I am back from break to not miss beautiful souls like you. Sending you love. Happy Sunday dear Cindy

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      1. Awwww aren’t you the sweetest.
        Thank you. Of course I do. Souls like you are my hearts come true!!!
        And to you,,,,,? you’re up early!💖


  2. Oh wow, what a lovely poem….from the title to every single line….that’s what we generally tend to forget….live the life & enjoy it as well….well expressed, Preeths ❤️✨

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  3. Oh wow, this is such a beautiful post!! Boy, did I miss your writing!!! I love the stars/scars stanza and the ending is perfect! You always create such magic with your words!!! I absolutely love this piece and I always look forward to your posts!! Hugs and love 🤗🖤

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    1. Oh dear, I am glad this could do something better to you. That’s the real purpose of writing. Cheer up buddy, life is too short to worry. Sending you love and hugs ❤️❤️❤️🤗

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    1. Wow, what a thoughtful say! Indeed it is dear Tndos 🤝, me too want to enjoy it to the fullest. Thanks and am glad you liked this ❤️❤️


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