The trials that you face
When you’re behind in your race
Please don’t sit hour after hour
While your tribulations tower
No,you are not just a number
So don’t just dream and be slumber
Life can be quite a mystery
And the key to success doesn’t come free
If you know that life is really hard
You should also know,in the end is a reward
So repel negativity with positivity
And watch life bring every single possiblity!
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The motivating words of your poem reminded me of a quote which I hold in high esteem.
It goes – “One day, the mountain that is in front of you will be so far behind you, it will barely be visible in the distance. But the person you become in learning to get over it? That will stay with you forever. And that is the point of the mountain.”
Brianna Wiest
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So well said!
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Ahhhh, I love this poem, dear Preeths. How very true it is, challenges abound, as do, the gifts we get back, when we keep moving…..I love it! Have a lovely week, my dear friend. ❤️❤️
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Thank you dear Jeff. Seeing your name in my notification daily is becoming my favourite. I really thank you for taking your time to read my posts. It means so much to me. Happy day ahead, stay safe. ❤️❤️🤗🤗
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You’re most welcome, dear Preeths. Ah, I am so pleased to know this, how nice and kind of you to write. Thank you. Ah, it is my complete pleasure, my friend. Your work speaks to me and is lovely. Thank you, you have a lovely day too! ❤❤❤
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Thanks! ❤
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So inspiring, Preethes! Beautiful writing. ❤ Take care!
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Thank you dear Cheryl.❤️❤️❤️ Glad to see you. Was thinking about you lately…. How are you doing?
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I have been a little tired and overwhelmed by health and family issues lately. Things will all work out OK, I think. I have fibromyalgia and sometimes have periods of fatigue. Thank you for your concern, Preethes. ❤
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Thanks for replying Cheryl. Am glad you will work it out! Take care of yourself, take rest dear Cheryl. ❤️❤️ Sending you love and prayers 🤗🤗
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Your poem is really motivating, wonderful work. Everything that we do or that happens to us has an ending which inturn has a reward.
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Thank you dear Tndos. ❤️❤️ I appreciate your kind comment. It means so much to me
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This is so very true, so well written!
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Thank you dear. ❤️❤️ Am glad you liked it. Thanks for stopping by!
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Excellent composition!
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Thank you so much. ❤️❤️ I am glad you liked it. Thank you again for connecting with Offshore Writings 😊😊
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Wonderfully inspiring 👌
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Thank you dear. ❤️❤️ Am glad to hear that 🤝
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Amazing my dear Ka! You are amazing 👏👏👏👏🌹❤️
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Thank you dear. That means so much to me ❤️❤️
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Always a huge pleasure, believe ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Beautifully penned! Very inspiring and helps you to keep going! I love the positivity! ❤
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Happy holi , a great motivation to keep going for our goals. Beautifully penned dear.
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Thank you dear. Glad you liked it. Happy Holi to you too 🥰🥰❤️❤️
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Happy Holi🌈🌈🎨🎨
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Thank you and wishing you the same. 🤝 Thanks for stopping by 😊
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Simply beautiful ❤❤❤
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Thank you dear Vani. ❤️❤️ Glad you liked it. Your kind comment is appreciated.
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Beautifully penned! This is truly a great motivation
Awesome post… awaiting your next blog post 🙂
Keep writing, keep blogging!
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Awww. Thank you dear. ❤️❤️ Am truly grateful for you spending time to read this. Appreciate your kind comment too. Thank you once again. Stay tuned for more 🤝
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My pleasure dear 🙂
Sure, would love to read more from your end…
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❤️❤️🤗🤗
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That’s really great. And very true!
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Thank you Vinny. Am glad you stopped by ❤️
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“Please don’t sit hour after hour
While your tribulations tower..”
Definitely the most poignant lines I’ve read in while! Beautiful and inspiring write as always!❤️❤️
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Thank you dear D. You always give me the best comment. I am so glad you liked it ❤️❤️ Much love ❣️ So
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And watch life bring every single possiblity! – this is the key indeed! Possibilities are infinite if we don’t judge where we are.
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That’s true Pragalbha. ❤️❤️ How accurate you are! Thanks for reading and appreciating. 😍😍
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You are very welcome 💛💛✨✨
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Thank you dear Kim. ❤️❤️ Glad you liked it 🥰🥰
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Wow lovely!!!!!!!! well done my friend 👏🏽👏🏽😊
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Wonderfully written. I really enjoyed the optimism of the last two verses! ☀️😊
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Thank you dear Rose. I am glad you enjoyed the last verses. ❤️❤️ Glad to see you around. Happy Sunday
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Beautiful wise words Preethes!
The gifts of hard work are soooo rewarding as you so poingently say in your poem.
Nice job!!!! 💖💖👏👏
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Thank you dear Cindy. 😍😍 Indeed it is. Glad you liked the poem. Happy Sunday 🤗
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You’re so welcome Preethes!!! Loved it and happy sleep and Monday when you awake to you!! 💖💖
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Wowwww it’s soo motivating…..Keep it up
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Thank you so much. Thank you for stopping by! Your comment means so much to me ❤️❤️❤️
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This is simply so beautiful….with a beautiful message….”If you know that life is really hard….You should also know,in the end is a reward”….the rhyming is amazing….Preeths, you’re an amazing artist….
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😍😍😍 Thank you Navin. I appreciate your kind comment. Have a wonderful weekend 🤝
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You’re very welcome Preeths….thank you and you too have a wonderful & peaceful weekend ✨❤️
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Preeths, this is soo uplifting!!
I love love love this🤩
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Thank you dear Akshita. 🥰🥰🥰 Am glad you love this. You are one of my motivation to post this today. Your support is overwhelming! You are so loved 😍😍🤗🤗
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Aww, that’s such a sweet thing to say!
You too!!
Have a great Sunday!!
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This is so so beautiful!!! Yet again, your rhyming is sublime!! I really love this piece, the number and slumber lines were my favorite! You are an amazing writer, my friend! I am continuously stunned by your outstanding work!!! Much love 🖤🤗
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Awww….thank you dearest Ace. Your beautiful comments is a bliss to me ❤️❤️❤️ . You are an amazing friend I got in WP. Please know that I admire your works too. Sending you loads of love 🥰🥰🤗🤗
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Aww I feel the same!!! And of course 🖤
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This is a great motivation!
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Thank you dear. ❤️❤️
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That’s really optimistic..
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Thank you dear Joyce. I am glad you felt so 🥰🥰
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It is the trial & tribulations that make us or break us…
We should keep our spirits high always no matter what.
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That’s right Dr. Thank you for this insightful comment. Glad you stopped by! ❤️❤️
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So beautiful ka!! 😍😍😍 Everyone has painful story but in the end they will get success.. ❤❤ your motivating blogs are always motivating ka..🤝💖
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How sweet! Thank you dear for your unchanging support, I appreciate your every comment. 😍😍😍 Much love to you ❤️❤️
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Thank you ka!!❤❤.. I will always support for you my akka🤗🤗.. much love to you my akka💕❤
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