Dark shades of love!

Posted byOffshorewriterPosted inPoemTags:, ,

I know that life is not a bed of roses
But what if life is not even a thorn of pieces!

When every time my love is rejected
The feelings inside me is getting complicated!

I am committed to this love by fate
And everything in detail I cannot narrate!

I am hiding in the dark shades of love
And I learnt to live like an injured dove!

The pain is so much that tears me inside
And I practiced how to keep it myself and hide!

I wish that soon death may come and greet
Cause I found that my love is just a defeat!

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Ps: Imagery poem, no intention!

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My Passion for writing unfolded during this lockdown, and here I am a blogger toady!

72 thoughts on “Dark shades of love!”

  2. Mmmm. A powerful poem, dearest Preeths. Life can certainly feel this way sometimes. You’ve expressed much emotion in a few powerful lines. Love it. ❤️❤️❤️

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  4. I was excited to uncover this great site. I wanted to thank you for your time due to this wonderful read!!

    I definitely enjoyed every part of it and I have you saved as a favorite to check out new stuff on your website.

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      1. You have an amazing gift of writing. I am amazed at the things that I see posted in your blog. I have always been drawn to putting my words on paper, and appreciate those who do it more often than I do, such as in your case.

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  20. “I am committed to this love by fate. And everything in detail I cannot narrate.” WOW!!!! This piece is so beautifully written and that line really stood out to me!! I love the flow here and your words took me on a ride!!! Amazing write as always, hugs and love dear friend 🖤🤗

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    1. Thank you dear Ace. I am so humbled to hear that from you. ❤️❤️❤️ It’s this support I needed to write more and thanks for always being there. Much love to you 😍😍🥰🥰🤗🤗

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  22. Jeg kan godt relatere til dit flotte digt….især med….”The pain is so much that tears me inside
    And I practiced how to keep it myself and hide!”….bliv ved med at udtrykke fra dit hjerte ✨💫

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    1. Tak så meget Navin. ❤️❤️ Jeg er ked af, at du kunne fortælle disse linjer. Dette digt taler virkelig mine personlige oplevelser. Men bare for at undgå sympathy comments skrev jeg den Ps.

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            1. ❤️❤️ I learnt Danish when I was in DK for 3 years. I speak and write very little. Luckily I found Navin who is in DK, so trying to catch up the language with him before I could forget. 😊😊😊

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