Every moment I am struggling
To forget the special part of my life
That part was you,who stood by me
And stayed only for a while
Every day is a picture of happiness
There’s no feeling of loneliness
And because of your beautiful love
Everything was magical
But then, as time goes by
Your love begin to fade away
You always had reasons to hurt
Our fairy land soon become a desert
Every time I think to move on
My heart says just to hold on
Many times I tried to search
To treasure your lost love
But I can only find a deep hollow
With unlimited boundaries
This makes me think deeply again
Why, why it has to be you?!
Offshore Writings
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Wow..heartfelt poem..
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Thank you dear Geeta. ❣️🤗 Am glad you liked it. It gives me immense pleasure to see someone likes my work. Thanks for connecting with Offshore Writings 9
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Wonderful poem and expressions
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Thank you dear. Glad you liked it ❤️
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Hi how r u? I tagged you for a Christmas tag. I would love if you participate in it…
Thanks
Anushka😊😀❤️😘
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Loads of love to you. 🤗🤗
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Really beautiful words, very heartfelt ❤️
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Thank you so much. Means a lot to me! 💕
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Beautiful poetry 🙂💐
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Thank you Shashank. 😊 Thanks for stopping by! 🤝
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You are welcome 🙂
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Aha, beautiful❤️
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Thank you little sister. 😍😘
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Beautifully written Preeths. Emotions just flow ….
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Thank you HS. 💕💕 I am glad you likedi t!
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Awww… I am so humbled by your words. You Made my day! 💕💕💕
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Beautiful poem 💖😊
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Though it hurts so much to love someone then it will just gone. Just savor the wonderful memories. Thank you for sharing your lovely poem.
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Thank you for sparing your time in our blog! I am so glad you liked it! Much love. 💕💕
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You’re much welcome! Your writings are like jewels for me. They are sparkling and very inspiring!
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Beautiful & heartfelt poem 🖤❤️
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Thank you Navin. Am glad you felt so. ❤️
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You’re welcome. I surely did ❤️✨
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Loved this poem !. And felt the emotion in it as well .
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Thank you Kay. Am glad you felt so. 💕💕💕
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I really felt the emotion of this poem ❤️
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Thank you dear Joana, means ba lot to me! ❤️❤️
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Lovely Poem Preethes and glad to know that you and your brother write here. I do hope there’s not trouble in paradise! ❤️❤️🤗
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😃😃😃 me too hope the same Cindy. And am glad you liked it.
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Thanks Preethes! Thanks, loved it yes!
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Oh….I love this part sooooo much…
But then, as time goes by
Your love begin to fade away
You always had reasons to hurt
Our fairy land soon become a desert
It takes me back to a time and place long long long time ago….nostalgic🙃😜😅🥰
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Thank you dear Rue. ❤️❤️ I am glad you liked it and also unhappy that you could relate the saddest part.
But I am still glad because it’s a past thing and you moved on! 😍😍
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😍🥰😘😍🥰😘
Very well captured my dear…
Moments well captured🎀💐
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🤗😍
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Lovely write 🖤
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Thank you D. 💕💕
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Of course!
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That’s beautiful! 💗
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Thank you Ash. Glad to see you around. 💕🥰
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Welcome ❤️ Yes, was pretty busy.
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What a wonderful poem!. Great.
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Thank you Sir. It means a lot to me! 😊
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Oh my goodness!! This so beautiful 🤩😀🥰 Thanks a lot for sharing…
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Thank you dear Anushka. I am glad you liked it! And that means a lot to me. 😍😍
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Your welcome 😊😃
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How many people write for this blog?
All best,
David
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Thanks David for asking, Offshore Writings has two authors. Me and my sibling. 😊 Now he is little busy, so you couldn’t see his posts. If you could spare some time, please check his older post https://offshorewritings.com/2020/10/07/let-me-do-it-tomorrow/
You will soon see his post coming. 😊😊 Stay tuned. 🥰
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Oh, you’re siblings! That’s amazing!👏😊
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Yes, we are D. Glad you found us. 😄😄
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My pleasure!
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Loved this heartfelt poem!
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Thank you best Ramya. Am glad you liked it. 😍🤗
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