When you can talk hours in phone and cannot talk to me only few minutes
When you are so in love with others chats and cannot spend time to listen me
When you know what am going through and you choose not to ask about it
When you are all the reasons to give me tears and you just don’t mind it
When you have free time and you still choose to stay away from me
When you know I am in so much pain and you just don’t care
When you have so much love from me and you really didn’t need it
How should I name this relationship which only knows to give love and get pain?
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Mmm. You have described the nature of suffering so elegantly, dearest Preeths. It is a reminder to me, and us all, I think, to make sure that we have people in our lives that love us unconditionally. Beautiful poem, my dear friend. ❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you and yes I will read rmore…
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Wonderfully written! Somehow giving your time and loving someone who will just ignore it, is quite useless. However, when you will give it to him, unconditionally it won’t be a waste of time. Thank you for sharing your heartfelt thoughts.
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I am overwhelmed by all your nicest comments. ❤️❤️ Loads of love to you! Stay tuned for more. 🙌
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Deep and beautiful
Can’t it be dedicated to mother nature ??
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Awwww… What a unique thought Dulcy.❤️❤️ It didn’t come up in my mind, I appreciate you reading it and giving the best comment. Probably this poem suits well and can be dedicated to mother nature as well! 😍😍😍
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😊thank you
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Wow! This was an intriguing change from the usual poems you write. But it’s amazing as always! Quite poignant, I’d say.
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Awww… Thank you dear for your beautiful comment. You always have the nicest thing to say! 😍😍😍
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My pleasure!!💕
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How do you know my wife lol
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😂😂 See I caught her! I believe this is just a joke. 😃😃
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Partly a joke but some lines were true
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😯😯
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Any advice for someone going thru this kind of “love”
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Oh dear, this is just an imagination to me. Am saddened if someone is going through this. 😔😔 The last option I would suggest is to sit and talk openly with the concerned person to make them understand what it feels like. If they still ignore, then it’s no use of having a fake relationship.
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Sometimes things r complicated. Finances, homes, cars, children
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Totally understandable. But try talking with the concerned person and see if things can be solved. We can only hope for the best. Stay strong! You gonna be alright. 👍😍🥰
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Yes I will be ok. Whole story ends with him ghosting me. Heartwrechingly terrible experience. A waste of almost 4 years 🤷♀️
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Oh dear, I wish I could help you! Hold on…. You need to be strong in the times of trouble! Sending you love and hugs. ❤️🤗🥰😍
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Thank u dear😆 I have learned alot of narcissism from this experience
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You can call it……’life’
😅😉🙃🤭😉😅
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That’s right dear. 🙌
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😉😉💗💟🙃🙃
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Ahaaa, that is such a beautiful piece ( considering it an imaginary one😅😌)
Deep thoughts out there🧡
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Thank you dear. 😊
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You are most welcome preeth🙂🧡
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Heartbreakingly beautiful
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Thank you Fiza. Am glad you felt so. ❣️❣️
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My pleasure
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Great fictional story Preethes!!! Love your expressive well thought out story and descriptive words. Happy weekend! ❤️ Cindy
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Thank you dear Cindy. Am glad you liked it! Happy weekend to you too. 💕
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You’re so welcome! Thanks and you as well! ❤️
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very emotionally grabbing. Somebody feels this way and may need to give the non-relationship a different meaning. invested in something that has no return value…
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Thank you bro for your valuable comment. 🤝 True that, when love isn’t valued you come out of it rather to suffer the constant pain.
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you are welcome!
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Good dear Offshore writer…stay happy..keep penning🤗🤗🤗⚘⚘⚘
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Thank you Anan. ❤️😍💕❣️
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Indepth poem
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Thank you Athira. 😍🤗
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Always welcome🙂
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Well written and thought of! Though dark but deep! ❤️
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Thank you Ash. It means a lot. ❣️❤️💕
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Most welcome! ❤️
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Great well woven poem! 👌🏼(Even though it’s a bit dark)
Btw, how are you doing?
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Thank you SS. Glad to see you around! Am good and thanks for asking. ❣️ How have you been? Been so long that I didn’t see you visiting Offshore Writings.
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Anytime 😀
That’s great to hear! I’m doing great these days. Yeah…..I’ve been quite busy (and sleepy due to classes 😅), it was nice stopping by, though
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😂😂
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It’s a very well-written poem Offshorewriter! ❤ So very dark! Glad you told us it's fiction! Enjoy your weekend! 🙂
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Thank you Cheryl. 😍😍 It’s just came in mind and I thought I will write. Enjoy your weekend. 🥰🥰
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This is just an imaginary poem.😐
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