I wish I could go back
And fix the crack
To keep me alive
And at least to survive
I know I am strong
But don’t know how long
The deep wounds inside
And my tears haven’t dried
Shouldn’t have walked away
But because of your betray
I took a decision that’s too hard
Had no choice but to discard
The fake you!
Offshore Writings
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The deep pain inside our heart always hits hard and so did your poem. It’s written so beautifully and it’s very touching!!!
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Thank you so much dear. Am so glad you liked it. I couldn’t follow you for some reason. 😞 Can you share any of your post link here. Will see if I can follow you.
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My pleasure!! This is the link to my latest blog- https://wordpress.com/read/blogs/179954899/posts/73
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Well done. I cannot agree more. You really do not lose anything in this situation. There is nothing valuable to begin with. On to better things!
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Thank you both for stopping by! I appreciate the time you spent on my post. 💕💕
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No worries, your thoughts are beautiful and speaking the truth!
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Offshorewriter, faux marble is more durable than the real thing. Faux fur is more humane than real. Many times faux is an improvement over the original. But fake relationships, not so much! Love your poem! ❤ All the best! Cheryl
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Thank you Cheryl for the wonderful comment! ❤️
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Amazing and conveys powerful emotions! ❤
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Thank you Cherie. Glad you liked it! 💕
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You’re most welcome. 💗
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Beautiful and heartbreaking.
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Thank you dear for taking your time to read and comment. It means a lot to me! 🥰
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Wow… What a poem that is
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Thank you so much for appreciating. It means a lot. ❤️
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🤝♥️
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Wowww..this was deep and poignant, both at the same time 🥺😍😍❤
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Awww… That’s a lot coming from you. Thank you dear Akshita. 😍🥰🤗
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You are most welcome Preeth.
❤
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Beautiful and powerful 💜
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Thank you Samreen! Glad you liked it. 💕❤️
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You are most welcome dear 😊💕
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Wow this is beautiful! … love the rhythm
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Thank you HS. You always say the nicest things! 🤗🥰
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❤️🥰
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Beautiful piece 🤝
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Thank you May. Thank you for stopping by! 😊
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Your welcome 🙌🏾
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Right decisions are always the tough ones. Beautifully rhyming poetry.. Loved it
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Awww.. thank you for noticing the rhyming! ❤️
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Touching Piece!
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Thank you dear. You are always good at encouraging me. 🥰💕❤️
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Beautifully written !
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Thank you Era. ❤️
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🧡🤗
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I love this poem. It’s beautiful….short yet so powerful….conveys everything….keep on writing and rocking Preeths🎀😍🤗🎀😍🤗
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My beautiful friend, you are an amazing person to always say nice things about my posts. Love and hugs! 💕🤗
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🎀😍🤗😍🤗😍🤗🎀
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Powerful words..
You are such an amazing supporter and motivator.I found that you visited all my posts and responded through comments and happy to see all those..
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That’s my pleasure! Thank you dear for the constant support you give. ❤️❤️
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Always welcome..🙏
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You captured the emotions so well. Powerful writing. ❤️
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Thank you Rishika. ❤️ I am glad you said it. 🤗💕
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Well penned dear..much power to u always👍👍👍😊⚘⚘
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Thank you dear Anan. Your support is my power! 🥰🥰
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Very nice and touching, every line is filled with emotions, great job 👍🏻👍🏻💕
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Thank you Dulcy. Am glad you felt so. ❤️❤️ This means so much to me. 😍
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Welcome 😁😊
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Your rhymes always do the magic. Even fake things seem surreal! 💖
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Thank you Ash. 😍 That’s so nice of you to say! ❤️
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My pleasure!
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When the illusion of love burst… all that we’re left with are its bitter droplets.
Pointed and poignant.
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Thank you Poet! And for the beautiful lines.. 😍😍
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My pleasure and you’re welcome.
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You little girl…. I am in love with your comment! 😍😍🥰🥰
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Oh yes, good writing and best to walk away from the fake while we heal ourselves. Nicely penned Preeths ❤️ Cindy
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Thank you Cindy. This means a lot to me! 😍😍
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you’re most welcome!
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🥺💔
I’m in love with your rhymings…❤️
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You little girl…. I am in love with your comment! 😍😍😍
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Hehe🥰❤️
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🤗😍
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Powerful 👍👍
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Thank you Ramya. Glad you gave it a read. 😍😍
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Touching and beautiful piece 🙏 Faux
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Thank you Faux. It means a lot to me. 😍
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