I thought, it was the aura of the sun dazzling me,
Till I could see no more, but then I realized it was you….
Just passing by!
I felt it was the glorious moonlight revealing a path of bliss,
Till no darkness was left, but then I realized it was you….
Staying a while!
I thought it was the cool breeze soothing me,
Till I felt peace, but then I realized it was you….
Entering my life!
I thought my life was concluded, but then I knew… I NEEDED YOU!
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Thanks for your like of my post, “Israel In Acts, 1:1-11, 33 A.D., Notes;” you are very kind.
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My pleasure. 😍
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Thank you very much.
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Beautiful lines !
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Thank you Bacardi. Stay tuned… ✌️
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It’s my pleasure, Offshorewriter….I’m tuning in for you…!
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😊😊
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Romantic 😍😍
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Wow! Beautiful 😍
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Thank you Ahtees. 💗
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Lovely!!💕
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Thank you. 💐
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Pleasure!!
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This is so beautiful. Wow!!! 😍😍
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Thank you for reading. Stay tuned 💗💗
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I thought it was the design of the post till I became accustomed, then I realised it was the content..
I needed this.
Well penned.
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Omg 🥰😍…. This is astounding…. We start to adore even the smallest things around us when we are with someone we love ❤ with whole heart
Very gracefully presented the thought🤗
KEEP WRITING✏
KEEP SHARING🤗
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Thanks Komal. Your lovely comment means a lot to me. Keep supporting. 💗💗💗
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Such a beautiful poem. Loved it😌😌
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Thanks Sruti. Am glad you liked it. 😍
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Beautifully written ☺☺
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Thanks Era. You never missed to leave a comment and I love that. 💗💗
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It’s a pleasure 💙
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Amazing poem.
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Thank you Doctor. It means a lot.. 😍 Thanks for stopping by!
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Beautiful 💕
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Thank you Aakanksha! 💗💗
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Samuel, this is a beautiful, flawless poem. The imagery is lovely, and the pace of the poem to the conclusion is perfect! I also like the peaceful, happy mood evoked by the poem and the well-chosen photo. All the best! Cheryl
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Hey… Thank you Cheryl. This is OffshoreWriter. Offshore Writings has two authors: Me and my brother. And my bro name is Samuel…
I am hoping that now you got it right!
And a big thank you for your comment. It means a lot to me.
Regards
Offshore Writer 💗💗
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Oops! Sorry for my mistake! I’ll try to make it up to you by sharing a story.
There is an old Aesop’s fable about a wolf who says to a lamb he is about to devour, “I hear you’ve been going around for over a month saying nasty things about me.”
“Sir,” said the lamb, “that cannot be…I was born two weeks ago.”
“Well, if it wasn’t you, it was your brother, and that’s just as bad!” replied the wolf and gobbled up the lamb. : )
Have a great day! Cheryl
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😄😄 Lol… This story fits here. Am glad for introducing me to you. Keep supporting Offshorewritings… Sending you love. 💗💗
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Beautiful! 💗💟
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Thanks Some.. 😍😍
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Such a lovely poem!!
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Thanks Nawazish.. Glad you liked it. 💗
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So romantic! Often when we fall in love, we start to observe the beauty in the nature around us. Nice one 🙂
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Thanks Jay. Your comment is lovely.. 💗
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The pleasure is all mine 🙂
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